Okay...

This was pretty good. Looks like you put a decent amount of time and effort into it. It's major fault however is the first few seconds. You shouldn't have silence in the beginning. I don't know how to explain it, but it bothered me. Either have the music start earlier, or have a sound effect in there. The rumbling effect was great, but needed sound. The text that slid across the screen went WAY to fast for anyone to read. You did very well with the rest of it, I think one last thing that needs to be worked on are the cloaks you have flapping in the wind. One is in the preloader, the other is during the flash. You should make them smoother, because the rest of your flash is very smoothly done, and it should fit in better.

-Good Job-

Congrats!

Congrats on number 40! I have quite a few things to say to you. The horses. I'm sure you're already aware of this, but they REALLY needed a little more effort than that. No shading done with them at all.. and they were really ... flimsy. Saito looked good in the preloader, but then when we get to see what he truly looks like, it's a big let down. Now that you've made so many flash, you should be able to at least make eyes more detailed than black dots.

The music worked, and it seemed like you had a lot of movements in sync with it. That is a plus. Your enemy at the end was WAY to cartoonish for the rest of your flash. It really didn't fit in. I would have liked to see you make your own backgrounds as well.

Congrats again, and I'll be waiting to see when you reach number 50!
:) -drawnfreak

Good, but is it good enough?

This is good. Your characters seem to be well thought out, but unfortunately, there isn't much to listen to. You should probably have sticky's voice a little bit louder, even though he doesn't say much, you should probably have background music, and you really need some better sound fx. I would say this is a good start, but you need a bunch of improvement. And your episodes need to be much longer if you're going to call them episodes.

Wow! It's amazing!

This is absolutely perfect. I own Kirby's Dreamland, and let me tell you, this is awesome! I hope you make an entire game out of it because it's wonderful. One suggestion, make sound effects for inhaling, and when Kirby gets hurt. That will make it much more like the original.

It's SO addicting!

Wow, I'm impressed. I've never played Balloon Fight before, but this game held my interest for a complete 2 hours! It really sucked that the rank raising got teenier and tinier as I went along, and when I reached about a rank of 85, my eyeballs hurt from staring so long. I gave you 4 on sound because they were like oldschool sounds, nothing new or different from most games. I think the fact that you can change outfits and your appearance is a good part of the game, so you can take a break from winning and go shopping. Good Job. :)