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[Shin Getter Robot Tribute]

Okay...

This was pretty good. Looks like you put a decent amount of time and effort into it. It's major fault however is the first few seconds. You shouldn't have silence in the beginning. I don't know how to explain it, but it bothered me. Either have the music start earlier, or have a sound effect in there. The rumbling effect was great, but needed sound. The text that slid across the screen went WAY to fast for anyone to read. You did very well with the rest of it, I think one last thing that needs to be worked on are the cloaks you have flapping in the wind. One is in the preloader, the other is during the flash. You should make them smoother, because the rest of your flash is very smoothly done, and it should fit in better.

-Good Job-

HaroFreak responds:

Now THAT'S what I'm talking about! Constructive criticism!

It's been a while since I encountered a review which points out errors!

Thanks for pointing out some flaws which slipped through. I'll watch out for it on my next project.

[Samurai Honour]

Congrats!

Congrats on number 40! I have quite a few things to say to you. The horses. I'm sure you're already aware of this, but they REALLY needed a little more effort than that. No shading done with them at all.. and they were really ... flimsy. Saito looked good in the preloader, but then when we get to see what he truly looks like, it's a big let down. Now that you've made so many flash, you should be able to at least make eyes more detailed than black dots.

The music worked, and it seemed like you had a lot of movements in sync with it. That is a plus. Your enemy at the end was WAY to cartoonish for the rest of your flash. It really didn't fit in. I would have liked to see you make your own backgrounds as well.

Congrats again, and I'll be waiting to see when you reach number 50!
:) -drawnfreak

wallpaperman responds:

thanks man, the cartoonish guy at the end i thought was pretty funny but then upon watching it again didn't fit in with the serious cartoon at all haha oh well, thanks for seeing what I didnt XD

[Skecth Playing!]

interesting.

Well, this certainly was interesting. The music as well. Looks like you put a decent amount of effort into it, and perhaps with a little more you could create something really awesome.

YoshY-txt responds:

Sweet i did put an effort but i wouldn't be fooling anyone if i said i did my maximum. if i take the time i'll make something sweet, and i will... just have to get the patience or some really big time with nothing to do...